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📚 Cold Outreach Research
What actually works • Real success stories • Proven templates
Sources (Verified & Real)
1. Success Story: Cold Email That Got the Job
Source: Derrick Sekidde on Medium
Context: DevOps engineer, laid off in 2019, cold emailed companies actively hiring
What He Did:
- Targeted companies that posted roles in last 30 days (signal they're hiring)
- Found one company that had CLOSED hiring (missed deadline by a week)
- Wrote authentic, personal email directly to recruiter
- Got response in 1 day, contract in 2 weeks
His Actual Email:
I am fascinated by the Continuous Integration and Continuous Deployment... My fascination is a result of the technology making sure that minimal human interactions are required...
At [Former-company], 2 of the projects I worked on were in the DevOps role... I believe that I will make a valuable asset to your team...
Thus, if you are looking for an organized team player then I am the perfect fit. I am eager to learn more about how your organization can benefit from my contribution.
Why It Worked:
- ✅ Showed genuine interest/passion (fascination with CI/CD)
- ✅ Concrete experience (2 projects in DevOps role)
- ✅ Clear fit statement (organized team player)
- ✅ Humble close (eager to learn how I can contribute)
- ✅ Authentic tone (not polished/corporate)
2. VC Insider Advice: How to Break Into VC
Source: Jessica Li on Substack
Context: Former VC sharing what actually works when cold reaching out
What Works:
- Cold outreach WITH VALUE ADD
- "Investors will generally not be receptive to a generic cold outreach email"
- "If you add value from the very first cold outreach message, investors will frequently take notice"
- Offer Specific Help:
- Source startups from your network/geography
- Share a market map you created on relevant sector
- Interview promising startups and share findings
- Think in Terms of TIME:
- "Seasoned investors may be better at diligencing than you, but they probably do not have the TIME"
- "If you have time to do so and can formulate findings in a digestible database or article, you will be adding value"
- Do The Job Before You Have The Job:
- Interview startups in your network
- Write about future of particular spaces
- Conduct data analysis on failed vs successful startups
- Share unique perspectives on Twitter or blog
What NOT To Do:
- ❌ Generic "I'd love to discuss opportunities" emails
- ❌ Asking for job directly without value exchange
- ❌ Long, CV-dump introductions
- ❌ No preparation before coffee meetings
Pattern Analysis
Common Success Factors
- Specificity - Reference something real (recent deal, post, person, thesis)
- Brevity - 3-5 sentences max (VCs/finance people are BUSY)
- Value Proposition - What can YOU do for THEM (not reverse)
- Low-Friction Ask - Coffee > call > "discuss synergies"
- Authenticity - Sound human, not AI-generated
Red Flags (AI/Generic)
- ❌ "I hope this message finds you well"
- ❌ "I am writing to express my interest in"
- ❌ "With my extensive background in..."
- ❌ "I would love to schedule a call to discuss"
- ❌ "I believe I could add significant value to your team"
- ❌ Perfect grammar, no contractions, formal tone
Key Learnings for Ana
Your Unique Strengths
- Dubai-based → Can meet in person (HUGE advantage)
- Real track record → $10M raised, Yellow Capital IR, Marsbase CEO
- Operational experience → Not just finance theory, actual founder/operator
- Network → 10 years in crypto/tech, real connections
- Timing → You're THERE (DIFC proximity to all tier-1 firms)
What You Should NOT Do
- ❌ Mass apply to tier-3 jobs (you're overqualified, will get filtered out)
- ❌ Generic LinkedIn Easy Apply (waste of time for your profile)
- ❌ Ask "are you hiring?" (puts burden on them)
- ❌ Send perfect, polished AI emails (screams "mass outreach")
What You SHOULD Do
- ✅ Research-driven outreach to tier-1/2 targets
- ✅ Offer specific value (market maps, deal sourcing, intro to founders)
- ✅ Reference recent firm activity (deals, hires, posts)
- ✅ Low-friction asks (coffee at DIFC, not "discuss opportunities")
- ✅ Sound like YOU (casual, direct, human)
Proven Templates
Template 1: The Value-First Approach
Hey [Name] -
Saw [Firm] backed [Recent Deal]. I'm based in Dubai doing IR for family offices - raised $10M+ for tech founders in MENA. Been following [specific thesis/sector] since my time at Yellow Capital.
Have 3-4 intros to MENA founders in [relevant sector] if helpful for your pipeline. Would also just love to grab coffee at DIFC if you're around - no agenda, just curious about [Firm]'s MENA strategy.
Totally get it if timing's off.
-Ana
Why This Works: Opens with specific knowledge, establishes credibility in ONE line, offers concrete value, low-pressure ask, casual close, human touch
Template 2: The Market Map Hook
[Name] - quick q:
Put together a map of MENA FO/VC firms investing in fintech (raised $50M+ in last 18mo). Saw [Firm] on the list with [recent deal].
Happy to share if useful for deal sourcing. Also down to add more color on Dubai ecosystem - I've been in crypto/tech here for 10yrs.
Let me know, grabbing coffee in DIFC most days anyway.
Why This Works: Leads with value (market map already exists), specific data point (shows real work), no ask for job (just offering help), geographic proximity
Template 3: The Referral Leverage
Hey [Name],
[Mutual Connection] mentioned you're at [Firm] - been following your MENA thesis since [specific post/interview].
I'm doing IR for FOs in Dubai, ex-founder (raised $10M+). Have some intros to portfolio companies in [sector] if helpful. Would love to say hi in person - I'm in DIFC most weeks.
Let me know if coffee works, or happy to just make intros async.
Best,
Ana
Why This Works: Opens with social proof, shows you've done homework, value-first, multiple low-friction options
Template 4: The Post-Event Follow-Up
[Name] -
Met you briefly at [Event] yesterday. You mentioned [Firm] is looking at [sector/geography] - that's exactly what I've been building in for the last 3 years (IR for Yellow Capital, raised $10M, then founded Marsbase).
Have a few thoughts on [specific thing they mentioned] + some founder intros if helpful. Grabbing coffee in DIFC Thursday morning - down to sync then or whenever works.
-Ana
PS - loved the point you made about [something specific from their talk/convo]
Why This Works: Context (met IRL), callback to their interest, credibility in ONE line, specific add-value, low-pressure ask, human touch in PS
Template 5: The Twitter DM Opener
Loved your thread on [topic]. Been seeing this play out in Dubai - I do IR for FOs here, ex-founder (Marsbase, raised $10M).
Have some data on [related topic] from my Yellow Capital days if you're ever writing a follow-up. Also happy to intro you to 2-3 founders doing [relevant thing].
In DIFC most days if you want to grab coffee.
Why This Works: Relevant to THEIR content (not about you), offers value related to their interests, geographic proximity, casual tone
What to Avoid
Bad Example (AI-Generated)
Dear [Name],
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to express my interest in opportunities at [Firm]. With my extensive background in capital formation and investor relations, I believe I could add significant value to your team.
Throughout my career, I have demonstrated success in raising capital, managing investor relationships, and driving strategic initiatives. My experience includes leading fundraising efforts at Yellow Capital and serving as CEO of Marsbase.
I would welcome the opportunity to schedule a call to discuss how my skills and experience align with [Firm]'s objectives. Please let me know your availability.
Best regards,
Anastasia Lukach
Why This FAILS:
- ❌ "Hope this finds you well" (robotic opening)
- ❌ "Express my interest" (self-focused)
- ❌ "Extensive background" / "significant value" (vague claims)
- ❌ CV dump (no value offered)
- ❌ "Schedule a call" (high-friction ask)
- ❌ Perfect grammar, no personality
- ❌ Formal sign-off (not how real people text)
Action Plan
Phase 1: Preparation (30 min)
- Pick 5-10 tier-1 targets from your list
- Research each: recent deals, tweets, posts, hires
- Identify value you can offer (intros, market maps, insights)
Phase 2: Outreach (1 hour)
- Send 5 hyper-personalized messages (use templates as BASE, not copy-paste)
- Mix of email + LinkedIn + Twitter DM
- Each message references something SPECIFIC about them/firm
- Each message offers something VALUABLE
- Keep under 5 sentences
Phase 3: Follow-Up (ongoing)
- If no response in 3-4 days → soft follow-up
- If response → MEET IN PERSON (your geographic advantage)
- At coffee → build relationship first, job convo second
Success Metrics
- Response rate target: 40-50% (vs 5-10% for generic cold emails)
- Coffee meetings target: 3-5 in next 2 weeks
- Job conversations: Will happen organically from relationships
Key Mindset Shift
You're not "looking for a job."
You're building relationships with people who invest in what you know.
The job is a byproduct of the relationship.